Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Young Bill is at it again!





















Young Bill was back to his old tricks trying to pretend to know a lot about physics. Too bad Young Steve wasn't around to help him out. We had the unfortunate task of reviewing his essay on friction today in class and boy was it horrendous. After finding and correcting his mistakes, we made a plan for writing a better essay of our own. That is tonight's assignment: write a 1 page essay about friction. Remember to avoid slang and to make sure your facts are correct. You need an introductory paragraph that states your thesis, and a conclusion that restates your original thesis and brings the piece together. The paragraphs in the middle are where you provide your details and evidence.

Remember your tools from Humanities: HOM and PACTS

Good luck!

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